Thursday, March 25, 2010

Pipe Dreams .... A Sedoka

























Rusty and discarded they lie
Where once they glistened with Ambitious Hope
Bound by gossamer webs of the Past.
Shells that no longer hold
The gushing force of raison d’ĂȘtre
Now forgotten and old ..someone's pipe dreams.

5 comments:

annand said...

pipe dreams is superbbbbb! u gently lead the reader to a rivetting climax, this is a quality that all dont possess!

shubd said...

Your comment is much appreciated annand . I do hope you come back for more :)

thanks for your visit .

Arti said...

Nice little poem..
very thoughtful..I loved it!!

shubd said...

Thanks Arti for reading and your appreciative comment :)

Jitu(Jyoti) said...

Short and sweet... :)