Thursday, March 11, 2010

RAVAGED














She
bloomed sure and eager
sunkissed and confident, brimming with
tender lofty dreams of Tomorrow .

He
watched dark and lecherous
arrogant and conceited , unmindful of her
tender lofty dreams of Tomorrow .


She
stood ravaged and devastated
riddled and torn , rot curling edges of her
tender lofty dreams of Tomorrow .

He
forgot and moved on
Oblivious and uncaring , as withered petals of her
tender lofty dreams of Tomorrow .



2 comments:

magiceye said...

brilliant!

InkTank said...

hii,
first of all, i reached your blog thru ur facebook, and i reched ur facebook thru tikuli dogra's poem. saw a list of people tagged on the right hand side, and ur name sounded so overwhelmingly maharashtrian, i was tempted to have a peek at ur profile. yes i love to write, and i love equally to photograph too. my FB has quite a few pics i have taken, and you gave me an idea to create another blog exclusively for pictures, will do it soon. you have an awesome command over words, the way you play with them, is a treat to read. i thot lemme take some time to read n comment:) and i liked the pipe snap a lot... and yes, this is rare, which people cant manage, to combine words and images!!! nice to find a puneite at her creative best!