Alluringly soft
Her moist red lips
Curled into a smile that missed her eyes
Burning hot
His drunken dimmed sight
Saw only the dimples on her cheeks
Insistently urgent
His yearning firm arms
Longed for her smooth supple skin
Coyly inviting
Her half teasing smile
Drew him quicker to her side
Intensely happy
His trusting young face
Rested most eagerly on her willing shoulder
Mockingly cruel
Her disdainful eyes
Unseen by his gullible juvenile inexperience
Lavishly abundant
His inexhaustible reserve
Of Youth ..of Wealth..Of confidence in the future
Abhorringly sad
This torrid affair
The repetitive gamble of THE VENUS FLYTRAP .
Writer's Island / 28 March 2008 /Prompts : "The Gamble" and "Torrid"
10 comments:
This plant is a drama all its own.
Yet somehow, there are some parallels with the Black Widow Spider. Both are "cannibals"!
A great sculpting of the prompt!
Gemma
Very well written..
word by word
wow, the venus fly trap must be flattered.:)
nicely written.
The use of an unusual thing to write about the prompt made this piece really surprisingly exciting. You're very creative to have thought of it.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
'Mockingly cruel
Her disdainful eyes
Unseen by his gullible juvenile inexperience'
Such great writing, I love these lines. The entire poem was wonderful, but I especially liked those.
I knew a girl like that once.In fact I still do! (hope she's not looking over my shoulder)
Nice piece.
Love the unusual metaphor! Well done!
very nicely done!!
scary... but oh so good!!
Nicely done - I've always found the Venus Fly Trap to be fascinating!
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